Name: ... (Anonymous) · Date: September 26, 2008 06:25 pm · For: Chapter 7

Awww!
Omg, another twiiist! :O

And they know everyone's names now!

Keeeeep it coming ^____^ I love it.

But Thranduil does call Glorfindel's name before he knows it, lol. Nevermind. It's just a tiny thing. Won't take a second to fix. ^.^

Author's Response: i'll keep writing, i do this for fun regardless of reviews and readers although they are very apprechited ^_~ and i caught the name calling, but it's fine only a tiny mess up, i'm surprised i haven't done it soon :P


Name: Dapper Scavenger (Anonymous) · Date: September 25, 2008 12:37 pm · For: Chapter 7

Oh this was lovely and also rather tense in parts!

 I'll just point out though that at the start of the last section Thanduil calls out Glorfindel's name  - I think tht os before he knows it.



Author's Response: Thanx, and yeah i know about the name i realized it like seconds after it was posted, sorry for the mix up but just ignore it *shifty eyes*


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