Not bad, although it was a little predictable it was still very sweet, I could of stood for a few surprises but nevertheless it was a good read, hope to see some more titles from you. On the constructive criticism side I believe your short and to the point approach was not the best approach, it would have been much better if you took the time to develop the story a little bit instead of jumping in right away, it started with a battle where Thranduil was injured, but what battle? How was Thranduil hurt? What were his injuries? Developmentally the story lacked so it left the readers with a lot of questions and it was too fast so it was a little hard to follow. However still it was sweet and I do hope to see more from you still.

-Nerwen