Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2013 10:53 pm · For: Chapter 1

Androgynous Elrohir reminded me of the 80's hard rock musicians. Maybe he was something like a Nikki sixx on middle-earth haha.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review and my sincere apologies it is so incredibly late. I was wandering through other fandoms when BOTFA finally brought me back to this. I'll be finishing this tale over the next month, hope you like how it ends up.


Name: Nessie-san (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2012 07:09 pm · For: Chapter 1

Oh, Legolas!! He's such a selfless, wonderful person. I nearly cried when I read this chapter. Legolas was so selfless and kind, and he presented his sword as a romantic gift before knowing of Arwen's engagement to Aragorn...Oh, poor Legolas!!!! ;_; There were a few grammatical errors, and one typo, in this. Same as the first one: comma splices (except for the typo). Well done on this, Joy-san. Very well done.


Name: Catherine (Anonymous) · Date: July 07, 2010 09:25 am · For: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this story and would love to read more of it. Especially more of the legolas/aragorn storyline.

Author's Response: Thank you very, very much for your review, I'm hoping to write more soon -- and it will definitely develop the Legolas/Aragorn storyline :D


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