Reviewer: Nessie-san (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2012 7:09 pm · On: Chapter 1
Oh, Legolas!! He's such a selfless, wonderful person. I nearly cried when I read this chapter. Legolas was so selfless and kind, and he presented his sword as a romantic gift before knowing of Arwen's engagement to Aragorn...Oh, poor Legolas!!!! ;_; There were a few grammatical errors, and one typo, in this. Same as the first one: comma splices (except for the typo). Well done on this, Joy-san. Very well done.
Reviewer: Catherine (Anonymous) · Date: July 07, 2010 9:25 am · On: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this story and would love to read more of it. Especially more of the legolas/aragorn storyline.
Author's Response: Thank you very, very much for your review, I'm hoping to write more soon -- and it will definitely develop the Legolas/Aragorn storyline :D
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