Reviews For Undone

Name: spinster (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2016 10:26 pm · For: Chapter 1

OK - decent premise, good writing.  But why in the world would the Mirkwood elves not have a spider antidote?  After all, they fight these spiders all the time, Legolas cannot have been the first person to be poisoned.  I would think a spider antidote would be very high in the Mirkwood healers concerns.

Name: DragonheartLeafindor (Anonymous) · Date: August 09, 2014 08:26 am · For: Chapter 5

Oh please...your story is so perfect! I can't stop thinking about it, and the ending was something like "What?!" Oh please, write more!

Name: DragonheartLeafindor (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2014 01:09 pm · For: Chapter 1

Hey, your story is very good, really. Are you still updating? Because it deserves a continuation. Your writing is awesome!

Name: ovoriel (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2011 07:26 am · For: Chapter 5

will there be another chapter of this? because it says "completed", but the final notes say there's more...
i really hope there is! ^_^

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