Name: Gravitys_Child (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2013 07:41 pm · For: Chapter 1

Okay, I'll admit that one was hard to read. I can see Haldir as the evil one, but Erestor? That's not him. Not at all.

Name: ree (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2013 08:29 pm · For: Chapter 1

I like the plot of this story, but (and honestly I'm trying to say this as constructive criticism) I couldn't tell want was going on for the most...the grammar and the way this was written was very....choppy and confusing. And the exclamation point after each phrase said by a character was driving me into ocd insanity. It also felt pretty rushed and this could've been much better with greater detail and explanation as to what was happening. one minute legolas was running, haldir's there, and bam, rape?

Name: jme24576 (Anonymous) · Date: September 11, 2012 06:59 pm · For: Chapter 1

Glad there was a happy ending! Nice of Elrohir & Elladan to help Legolas heal. However, I would really like to see you do a sequel where they find out that it was Haldir & Erestor who raped Legolas & they punish them. I think they need to face judgment for what they did! Please?

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