Name: rie (Anonymous) · Date: March 10, 2016 02:11 pm · For: Chapter 3

Awesome! The story is really interesting, I want to 

know more :)




Name: spinster (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2016 11:37 pm · For: Chapter 1. In the Dark, two beginnings...

I love this story - what there is of it.  You write with such realistic detail.  The characters really come alive, you are GOOD at this.  Please, pleaase please write more.  The desciptions and warnings and characters listed are SO tantalizing.  I was very frustrated when I came to that abrupt end of chapter 3 with EVERYHING unresolved.




Name: dS (Anonymous) · Date: October 19, 2015 05:08 am · For: Chapter 3

more? *puppy eyes*




Name: Inkisses (Anonymous) · Date: December 21, 2014 08:36 pm · For: Chapter 3

Wow, I love this! I really hope you continue some day. If you find some bits of writing more boring than others, it's ok to summarise it or hint at what happened through dialogue etc. We want to read the parts that you want to write because that's where an author comes alive!


Name: miscanthus (Anonymous) · Date: March 03, 2013 06:01 am · For: Chapter 1. In the Dark, two beginnings...

Great! I followed the story long ago on adultff but it was so sad you never continued ...perhaps there is hope ?


Name: jme24576 (Anonymous) · Date: September 11, 2012 05:55 pm · For: Chapter 1. In the Dark, two beginnings...

Is the first part Legolas' point of view? If so, poor Legolas! Is he fading? What happened?


Name: jme24576 (Anonymous) · Date: September 11, 2012 05:48 pm · For: Chapter 3

Poor Legolas! Why is Thranduil so cruel to him? Oh please update soon!


Name: meg (Anonymous) · Date: August 07, 2012 09:58 pm · For: Chapter 3

Love it. Want more


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