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Name: Agent J (Anonymous) · Date: May 21, 2012 06:51 pm · For: Chapter 1. Introductions all around!

I'm sorry - poor characterization (I only read the first chapter, but Hugo is COMPLETELY out of character), poor spelling/grammar... I shan't be continuing on. :(

Name: Melissa (Anonymous) · Date: April 26, 2011 06:09 am · For: Chapter 1. Introductions all around!

Sorry but your portrayal of Hugo as a foul mouthed, crass and classless individual is way off the mark. You need to do some research into the person to make your stories enjoyable to fans. Also, checking spelling would be a nice idea also and gives your work more apologies if english is not your first language.

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