Reviews For The Burnt God

Name: Senta (Anonymous) · Date: September 16, 2015 10:37 pm · For: Pulsation

Oh, your Sauron is such a poor nerdy sweetie, who haven't had sex for millenia! The dialogues were strange at times, but I've enjoyed this overall. The last two parts are worth re-reading.

Name: sebastiandragon (Anonymous) · Date: January 17, 2014 01:49 pm · For: Pulsation

Good Lord, this is perfection!
I've read it in one breath and I loved every single bit of it.
Your Melkor is so natural, as if Tolkien has come to life to study the Vala deeper. All Melkor's progress of character is so believable, that I want to bow to you for this for an eternity:)
But Sauron stunned me even more. While yours-his appereance is very rare and therefore I found it fantastic to imagine, his character left me breathless.
Because he is Pure Darkness, Darkness that opposes Light only in ways of thoughts and design. He is no Evil, because he loves, he honourably serves, he grants loyalty, he never punishes just for his own joy. He stands up for what he thinks right and he stands up for others. The lattest has struck me most. He is truithful Darkness. Darkness that knows Order, Honor and Dignity. Gosh, I'm in love with him now even more than ever. And how he loves his Master and tells him the expensive truth is realy breathtaking.
Well, his maiden-adventure was hilarious. As well as his rivalry with Gothmog. Two damn idiots:):)
And the last scene - with Melkor telling Sauron the truth and taking off his crown and the whole love act after, especially the moment when their spirits meet... Gives me an urge to go re-read it a bit later.
Yeh, the Mouth of Sauron coming out this way is damn interesting:)
Thank you for the Story.
I'll be re-reading it. It is gorgeous.

Name: Quantumphysica (Anonymous) · Date: May 21, 2013 01:25 pm · For: Piercing

Okay, I so am a fan of Mandos now. That was evil of entirely different sort than Melkor's xD And I absolutely loved it!

Name: Nellian (Anonymous) · Date: April 04, 2013 05:26 pm · For: Piercing

I do hope you will be writing more stories, as this was wonderfully written. I found that I just could not feel bad for Melkor, but I pitied Sauron very much.
Please don't stop with this story!

Name: Firiel (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2013 07:50 pm · For: Punishment

I like your Melkor! So vulnerable. It's unusual. And I like you're showing the interior of Morgoth's domain and relationships between the villains. Vivid.
I didn't get Mandos part. How could he, a Vala, be so deceitful and abusive? I don't fully understand his motivation. :)
The Eye of Sauron is awesome! And Sauron loving his master! It never occured to me before that love to Melkor is one of the reasons for this Maia to have been seduced into his service.

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