Name: Mike (Anonymous) · Date: January 31, 2017 11:16 pm · For: Prologue


Name: Talullah (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2015 05:19 pm · For: Postscipt

Well worth the wait! This was such a lovely coming-of-age story. I think you nailed Carnistir's voice perfectly - the voice of a grown man remembering his past, yes, but never in a maudlin manner. Love the little details, especially the food allergies/intolerances, which really made him real for me, right as the story started.

Thanks so much for taking up the challenge and for posting here. :)

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