Reviews For The Fell Winter

Name: Sue (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2018 02:21 am · For: Chapter 15

This story is so well written.  The plot flows easily and the characters come alive.  Well Done!

That said, I am diabetic.  This tale is incredibly saccharine !  I needed extra insulin once I finished it.  I'd like to see it rewritten without the layer of cotton candy that swaddles it.




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