This was a good story, it was very sad at parts and sometimes hard to read, but I know that it was intended to be that way. I imagine that you never liked Aragorn very much? He was very out of character in this fanfiction, (I found his character to be unbelievable most of the time) which is understandable considering the circumstances of your fanfiction, but not so otherwise. There were some grammar mistakes, but the story was good as a whole. However, I think you would like to know that chapter 12 (I remember it was 12, but you should check again) is a fragment of material from the previous chapter and there is no original material. If you can, I would delete that. For these comments, please understand that this is one of the better fanfictions I've read - however I was very disappointed that Thranduil dies, he is a very important character to me and I am hoping to see him again in the sequel (I already know that he won't be - but it is stupidly sad - stupid because Aragorn was so dumb in this story!) Thank you for sharing.Reviewer: Recita1717 (Anonymous) · Date: May 10, 2010 12:25 am · On: Epilogue
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I want to know what happens I want to know what happens!!!!!! This is great, I thought that I would not like the twist on Aragon, but boy is it FANTASTIC. The characters are played well and except for a few grammatical and spelling errors, I have no complaints and only praise.