Hi! Had the pleasure to read your story in one go. Can't believe it's your first attempt as it is written so well. I liked it a lot and started 'The Song of Sunset: The Third Age' right away and can't hardly wait for you to continue.

I especially enjoyed your description of everyday life and the development of the relationships/friendships. To my mind Isildur and his boldness were a little bit overdone but he certainly made a good 'bad guy'. :-)

Hope you will write a LOT more to come! Thanks for the story!

This fic doesen't seem too long! (but my review is, sorry) I'm already waiting for the next! But don't hurry, I'd better wait and have good chapters. And, above all, you must have fun writing it!

I didn't understand really how much Glorwas suffering for Melorian until now. But hope he'llget over it.

Millennia of love... millennia... of silent, unselfish love. It's simply too much to figure out for us mortals, but you managed to give the idea.

I'm happy you choosed Elrond and Erestor, they're simply made for each other. And it doesen't look like a first attempt, it's too good!

There's only one little thing tha left me unsatisfied: the lovemaking between the two... there was like... something missing. The last moments of their relationship are too... don't know. Maybe it's just that I'm shocked by the fact  the fic is over and by their gettin together. I'm telling you not to discourage you, but because I respect your work and hope it will always be good as it has been until now.