Name: Talullah (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2016 06:17 pm · For: Chapter 1

I love this! The OFC POV is very fresh and with few strokes you paint very well the climate of fear and oppression. It left me with a very vivid image of what it would feel like for a low class Numenórean at that time, not really being able to afford a choice for one side but with no enthusiasm for the other. If feels very true to life - makes me think of memoirs of civil wars and especially of the Cultural Revolution, for some reason. The barely-there relationship with the unnamed woman was a poignant note too. Thanks so much for the entry.

Author's Response:

Thank you! The poor so often have much fewer choices, don't they? Although sometimes even the rich and powerful don't have choices left to them.

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